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" you think the look of us means were savages? then you never would expect how we are "

-----Intro------ Edit

This is the kind of place your mother told you to stay away from as a cub. A place where nothing good happens. You where scared as cubs but always thought nothing was there because of how quiet it always was. Honestly where you deaf? unable to hear the screams of undeniable death? Is that why you decided to roam the forest of darkness? Imbecile they all called you. Have you lost your mind? They'd scream. You'd laugh and say. "Nothing can stop me." That's what everyone thought. Remember this. you can't escape once you go. You can't leave once you enter. You cant stop their blood thirsty jaws from tearing you from limb to limb. Although nobody has stayed long enough to tell anyone else. They don't know that though. because they can never remember what happened that day. What happened the day it started.

Iris wasn't always bad. Lets just say. Be careful what you say to someone you think is weak.

Iris was a gentle pup. He cared for his mother and sister but they would never show affection to him. They never knew what he was capable of. No. Not until they pushed him to far. He was their servant, un-cared for, un-loved. So he snapped. He killed them both. No regret no more slave work, finally free. Finally to himself. He felt alive. He'd chuckle and run. run to the place with no lights. hiding away from everyone. everyone who would judge him taunt of the things he did. But he didn't care. he would gather all the rejects and the Broken Whispers. for a final chance to make their lives worth every. Little. Moment.


You ran, your legs trembled in desperation to hide, but no matter what you did that howls always followed you. You whined your paws slipping against the damp earth. You fell to your side hurrying up quickly and limping to an underbrush. You panted softly whimpering as you ducked under a fallen log. Your face was frozen with fear as you tried to control your panicked breaths. You heart beat faster as the howls ceased. You sighed falling onto the ground in relief. "Home... I'm coming home.. alive.." You smiled pulling yourself up a laugh escaping your throat. "ha... that's right.. alive.. home!.." something pulled you down, short to your laughter you cried out your paws collapsing under the weight. "NO NO PLEASE!" You started to cry, your body bobbing up in down in hysteria."Please..." A dry laugh sounded through the empty air. "We show no mercy for the weak.." claws dug into your spine, you felt them pierce through your flesh as blood trickled through your fur. You yelled out pain tracing through your body. "STOP! PLEASE!" The male howled in laughter his grip on your back becoming more stern. you heard more animals pawing their way closer to you. "Stay back.. please." You coughed clawing at the ground unable to move from the massive males grip. He moved his grip to your neck pulling himself off you body to duck and stare into your eyes. His eyes where a profound silver, soulless and empty, no love, no heart. Just pain. He cackled yipping at you. You flinched whining louder as he flashed his teeth. They where caked with dried blood and flesh. Insane... utterly maniac... You trembled. I'm going to die. He pulled away, leaving your paralyzed body to quiver. Run. Your body ached to run as fast as you could. You dug your claws into the soil simply trying to pull yourself up. He cackled again pushing your back, creating a worsened pain to lick at your flesh. You howled, panting as you looked up tears stinging your eyes. "What do you want..." He cocked his head staring at you with a innocent gaze. "Food." He stared at you for minute and grinned maniacally. "Attack."

More Information Edit

Canine and Feline
Rp Type


I Religion Edit

The pack of broken whispers is committed to fallen stars and fallen stars, only if we catch you worshiping starclan punishments will be serious and not tooken lightly.

II Double pack/ clan/ tribe Edit

If you are caught double claning/ packing/ or tribing the punishment will be tooken into hands immediately and the punishment would be greatly painful.

III loyalty Edit

If any from the pack find you being miss loyal will be one of the biggest regrets that you ever have done, and may your fate may be chosen by iris.

IV Questions Edit

If you may find any questions about anything ask iris and he will try his best to answer your question, it has to be appropriate.

V Names Edit

For the names they must only be the suffix, if you don't know what a suffix is its only one word for your name.

VI Challenging Edit

You may challenging any other rank except for alpha, thou you may get alpha's permission before challenging the pack mate for that ones rank.




The alpha keeps track of his pack, he leads them into war, battles and he decides what shall happen to them.





The beta's stay by the alpha's side helping them, giving advice and is was the strongest of the brokens and delta's.




The delta is the third in command, and is also the trainee of the beta or alpha.




The reaper's are in charge of killing, torturing, and and taking care of the prisonors and must not say no to doing they're job.




The brokens are basicly like warriors, they don't have much purpose but they fight and thats they're job.




The brokens teach the trainee's to become the future and the strongest of the pack.




The healer cares for the wounded and sick pack- mates, they are taught ever herb that is known and how to cure.




They give birth kits and then are known as the birther's pending on who has pups or kits will be killed or exiled, they are weak and young they would be no help.




They are again the weakest for the pack and wouldn't be able to fight, but if iris says they may fight in battles

Language Usage Edit

  1. Twolegs- Opposites
  2. Clans- The Weakened
  3. Anatomy Is NOT Allowed, Nobody Else understands
  4. Coral Canyons- Bloody path
  5. Jamaa Township- fallen stone 
  6. Sarepia Forest- lost path
  7. Kimbara- sharded sand
  8. Appondale- Treeless
  9. Mt. Shiveer- Flake
  10. Temple Of Zios- Ori Ground
  11. Dark Forest- Fallen Stars
  12. Star Clan- Risen Spirits


Clothing To Wear Edit

Skull, Fox hat, Raccoon hat, flower crown, spring crown, flower.
Spike, Leaf necklace, Scarf, moon necklace.
Elf armor, Leaf bracelets, Certain gloves
Worn, Elf armor, Spartan armor, jamaaliday bow, Sword.
Elf armor

Ally Form Edit

Leader Name/Alpha:


Reason Why You Want To Be Allies:

Roleplay Example:

Number Of Warrior Books You Read:

Other (optional):

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How To Join Edit


Pack Name(Clan Names Allowed Exceptionally):





Reason Joined:

Roleplay Example:


Free Chat?:

Canine Or Feline:


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-Rivals- Edit

-Allies- Edit

___Punishments___ Edit

  1. Warning
  2. Elderly Rank
  3. Banned From The Code Of Broken Whispers
  4. Torn Ear
  5. Blinded
  6. Scar on side
  7. Exile

Rules About This Page Edit

  1. Dont Copy It, Dont Paste Without My Permission.
  2. Under The Paragraph Quotes You May Enter Your Own Photos And Quotes.
  3. If Your Name Is On The Page You May Insert Of Picture Of You And What You Look Like.
  4. Do Not Edit This Page Unless You Ask Me First.
  5. Please If You Have To Copy The Form Of Entry To Join.
  6. If You Have A Problem With This Page Tell Me
  1. Tangled Forest-Burke
  2. Flake-Burke
  3. Ori Ground-Burke

-Quotes- Edit

"We're going to make you better. Better means good. Good means evil." ~ Sorrel & Iris

"The Only Thing That Keeps Me Sane Is The Satisfying Pool Of Blood At My Paws Is That To Hard To Believe?"~Iris

"You don't need the stupid clans that always grovel to "StarClan". You just need to feel the lake of blood in an animal's body before you kill them." - Sorrel >:)

" Insanity is like a drug, but kills everyone around you instead " - Wolf

--Fan Art-- Edit

Gallery (Pictures) Edit

Oc Pictures Edit

  • Iris
  • Wolf
  • Spring

-Polls- Edit

~ Editing done by Faded Questions ( xXUnforgivenXx )